Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 25 August 2017

Writing Reflection T3W5 2017

Writing Reflection


Video Notes: This week on a site called video notes allowed us to write down things whilst watching a video. The video we watched was salmon life cycle. We had to write down what we heard and put it in our own words. Here are is the facts I've gathered.


Salmon are one of the most prized fish in New Zealand. In December you might see some salmon in the water.


Salmon spend two years at sea and come back for a month so they can go to their spawning ground.Whilst doing this they try to relax wherever they can to have a break from the strong corrunt.


When they get close to their spawning ground they all group together waiting for a good time.

They hang quite close together.

The fish have become dark they haven't eaten since they were at sea.

The hens are female salmon the jacks are boy salmon.

The hen make a hole in the ground for the eggs when she is ready to lay the eggs jacks will fertilize it. The jacks will fight off other jacks.

They lay eggs up to 4 thousand per time.

The baby salmon are smaller than a 10c coin.

The next time you will see them they will be a big size.



Friday, 18 August 2017

Literacy Reflection T3W4 2017

Literacy Reflection T3W4

Rugby Commentary: This week the teacher set us a task which was... rugby commentary. For this activity we had to watch a video of Damian McKenzie for 45 seconds without volume so we could pretend to be a person like Damian McKenzie himself. WALT: Write for different audiences. Here is one that I have done:


Friday, 7 April 2017

Literacy Reflection T1W10 2017



Literacy Reflection

Writing: This week for writing the class has written written off story starters this website is called pobble 365. For the story starters I did mother of dragons it's about how zoya has a dragon which thinks zoya is her mother. I have not completely finished this writing but here is my work. Here is the link to pobble (The blue is the story starter).

Mother Of Dragons
When the dragon had hatched, crawling out of its shell onto her bed, Zoya knew that her life would never be the same again.
She had brought the dragon far away from her village; away from the people who would hurt it and take it away from her. As she held it in her hands, feeling its claws affectionately digging into her fingers through her gloves, Zoya knew that exactly what she had to do. What they had to do. Together.
The dragon gazed at her. She could see the flames burning within its eyes. It was totally dependant on her, as a new-born child is to its mother. And yet, strangely, she felt dependant upon the dragon as well; dependant upon what it was and what it would become in time.
They would become inseparable. Their futures were entwined. Their adventures were only just beginning…
This wasn’t the only dragon that zoya had bonded with before. She had once had another dragon but the people from her village took him away. That’s why she wasn’t sure if she
could take care of the new dragon.
Just while Zoya was thinking so many thoughts in her head, the dragon made the weirdest noise that anybody had ever heard. Then it all went silent for at least 2 minutes. Then she heard voices and for some reason she couldn’t help but think that she knew this person. It was her father. She hadn’t seen him for years and he must have come back to hear that Zoya was missing, he must have got out a search party. The only problem was that her father dislikes dragons and also wasn’t very fond of her, so she ran with her dragon.

Word Work: This week for word work as usual I wrote the meaning, the sentence of the word and Origin. For the activities this week I did across and down. For that activity I had to write my words across and down.  Then for the extra activity I did pyramid writing. I had to write one letter at a time so for the first time next two letters for the next. Here is my work.

Appearance
Meaning: What you look like or the way someone looks at you.
She was not happy with her appearance.
Origin: Latin, Late Latin, Old French and English

Luxury
Meaning: In great comfort or elegance.
Her life was luxury.
Origin: Latin and Old French

Jewellery
Meaning: Jewellery is like necklaces, earrings, some bracelets and more.
Her drawers were full of jewellery.
Origin: Old French and English

Proceed
Meaning: Begin something you proceed something.
Let’s proceed with our plan.
Origin: Latin and Old French

Decrease
Meaning: Make something smaller like amounts, intensity and degree.
The war makes the amount of people decrease.
Origin: Latin and Old French

Ceremony
Meaning: A public occasion or religious occasion celebrating an event.
It was a big ceremony.
Origin: Old French and Latin



Guarantee
Meaning: an assurance that something will happen.
The guarantee was wrong.
Origin: Spanish, French and English.

Buried
Meaning: bury something in the ground or put something in the ground.
He was buried alive.
Origin: West Germanic, Old English and English.



Friday, 31 March 2017

Literacy Reflection T1W9 2017












Literacy Reflection


Writing: This week for writing I have started on my camp reflection. It still might need a bit more detail in it but here is what I have so far.


In week 6 term 1 the Mamaku syndicate separately went on camp and we stayed in a lodge place in Westport. My class M2 went on camp in week 6 on wednesday Term 1. We went to this camp for fun education. Mr B also went on this camp along with our teacher, some parent helpers and of course the kids. One extra thing the food was great. We did lots of fun activities on camp like walks historical museums coal mines and more.

















Word Work: This week for word work like last week I have written down the meaning of my word, the origin of my word and a sentence with my word in it. This week for word work I have also done two activities one of them was word code and the other one was blue vowels. For word code I had to use a shape for each letter and then I would use the shapes to spell out my word. For blue vowels I had to write down ten of my words and colour all the vowels in blue. Here is my work.


Command
Meaning: Give an order or commanding someone to do something.
I command you to eat spaghetti.
Origin: Late Latin and Old French

Length
Meaning: The measurement of something like it was 1 metre long
The length of the tree was only 2 metres.
Origin: Germanic, Old English, Dutch and English

Benefit
Meaning: a benefit is when you get an advantage from something
It was a big benefit.
Origin: Latin and Old French

Citizen
Meaning: The people of some place
They were english citizens.
Origin: Latin, Old French, Anglo-Norman French and English

Expense
Meaning: The cost of something
The expense was big.
Origin: Unsure

Temperature
Meaning: The heat of something
The temperature was very cold.
Origin: French, Latin and English

Relative
Meaning: The relation of somebody like somebodys family.
I have lots of relatives.
Origin: Late Latin, Old French and English

Witness
Meaning: A person who sees something that has happened
The witness was terrified.
Origin: Old French and English

Influence
Meaning: An effect on somebody in good way or bad
She was a bad influence.
Origin: Latin, Old French, Medieval Latin, Scholastic Latin and English



Friday, 17 March 2017

Literacy Reflection T1W7



Literacy

Writing: This week for writing I have made a introduction about Shantytown. I had to have the 5ws in the introduction.
Here is my work.


Word Work: This week for word work (like last week) I have written down my words, the meaning and the origin. Here is my work.

Annoy
Meaning: Making someone irritated or a bit angry.
You Annoy me.
Origin: Old french, Latin and English

Festival
Meaning: A celebration day
It was a big Festival.
Origin: Latin, Old French and English

Miserable
Meaning: Sad or unhappy
I was Miserable.
Origin: Latin, French and English

Satisfaction
Meaning: Fulfilment of a wish or expectation
She was full of Satisfaction.
Origin: Latin, Old french and English

Misunderstanding
Meaning: Unable to understand something correct
It was a big Misunderstanding.
Origin: Not sure

Invalid
Meaning: A person weak or disabled.
He was Invalid.
Origin: English

Continually
Meaning: Something repeated frequently
The siren Continually went off.
Origin: Unsure

Abrupt
Meaning: Something happened unexpectedly.
The Abrupt was surprising
Origin: Latin

Friday, 3 March 2017

Literacy Reflection T1W5 2017

Word Work: This week for word work I haven't completed a activity but I have explained The meaning of my words and the origin of my words.
Here is my link.

Writing: This week for writing I have done some writing notes about the New Zealand Falcon.
Here is my link .

Literacy Goals: This week the M1 and M2 have done literacy goals. We had to write down our goals then we had to explain how we are going to achieve it. 
Here is my work.







Friday, 2 December 2016

Writing Reflection T4W8 2016



Writing Reflection
This week for writing I have completed a lyric Christmas Tree. What I have done exactly is I have written Christmas things related to New Zealand in number order shaped like a Christmas tree. I liked doing this activity because it was fun to write down things about New Zealand but in a Christmas way I guess.
Here is my work.

Friday, 25 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4W7 2016

Writing Reflection
This week for writing I have written three reasons why I should be on Santa's nice list. Should you be on the naughty or nice list? Here is my work. 




Friday, 18 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4W6 2016

Writing Reflection
This week for writing I have completed an earthquake recount. I have had to explain what happened when the earthquake happened. Here is my work.


Thursday, 10 November 2016

Writing Refection T4W5 2016


Writing Refection
This week for writing I have completed quite a few things related to Myths and Legends. For this blog post I chose to put my own design of a  mythical creature on here instead of some of the other ones I have completed. I thought that making my own mythical creature was quite fun. Here is my writing.
  

Friday, 4 November 2016

Writing Reflection T4W4 2016

Writing
This week for writing I have had to draw one of my favorite mythical creatures then I had to write a little bit about them. I learnt a bit more about mythical creature while making this. Here is my work





Friday, 28 October 2016

Writing Reflection T4W3 2016

Writing
This week for writing I have done a piece of writing which is about a special place for my family. I had to write down why it is special to my family. I chose Nelson because I lived there for four years and my sister still lives there.  Here is my work.

 

Friday, 14 October 2016

Writing Reflection T4W1 2016

Literacy Reflection
Writing - This week for writing I have written about the life cycle of a butterfly I have explained what happens in a Butterfly/ Caterpillar's life. Here is my work.

   

Friday, 9 September 2016

Writing T3W7 Reflection

Writing T3W7
This week for writing I have written about a household object. For my writing I chose a toaster to write about then I recorded my self reading out the words.


Friday, 24 June 2016

Reflection W8

Reflection Week 8
Here is the thing link.
There are all my follow ups on the thing link just hover over them pick one of them and have a look.

Friday, 17 June 2016

Week 7 Reflection

Week 7 Reflection
Word Work- This week for word work I have done silly sentences. I had to write down words that I know how to spell and I didn't know how to spell and make them into sentences.




Numeracy- This week for numeracy I have done a screen cast of me ordering decimals. I had to put them into smallest to biggest order.


Here Is The Link.




Reading- This week for Reading I am in a new group, the group is called Fluency use punctuation to enhance the meaning. Well this week I did a google drawing showing and explaining the needs of comma's.




Writing- This week for writing i have written a show not tell piece. Try guess what emotion I have written about.

Friday, 3 June 2016

Relfection Week 5

Week 5 Reflection
Writing- This week for writing we have done the Charlotte's web article from last week again but BETTER.                                 Here it is. 

Reading- This week for writing I have done a word sort of thing.
I had to choose a word that seemed like the right word for the sentence and write it down.
Here it is.

Word Work- This week for word work i have done silly sentences I had to write down words that I know and that I don't know
Here it is.



Numeracy- This week for Numeracy I had to have a buddy and we rated each others screencastify. We were learning how to add and subtract decimals. Here is the links to my the screen castify Ayesha 

Friday, 27 May 2016

Week 4 Reflection

Writing- This week for writing we have created Charlottes web writing. We had to write the story so far but we had to write it like a newspaper artical. Here it is.



Numeracy-This week for numeracy I have created a slide show with two other people. This slide show shows you how to solve a decimal problem. This slide show is about how to work out a decimal problem and it might help you work out other decimal problems.
  


More Numeracy- This week for more numeracy I have done a Screencastify to show how to work out a decimal problem. I have been learning to work out decimal problems also.


Reading-  I have been learning to use prior knowledge to predict meaning. This week for reading I have done a word activity. I had to search up in a dictionary to find words that I did not know what means.